Looking up

Lifeless main characters, Katsu, Minna and Rose. The three are bound together through odd circumstance to overcome the world and it's great ordeals.

Life is complicated and it can have many meaning. Every living thing has a meaning, ones purpose is just as important as one's existance, without it your "Lifeless".

Looking up

Pushing to the LIMIT!

tag : Lifeless Minna Rose Katsu

Failed manga pages

Failed pages for "Lifeless". I put alot of enthusiasm into these pages since I believed that I was close to finally starting something that I've been training my whole life for. But alot of issues came up with how I approached my first chapter and I realised it's alot harder than I thought. So in the end I had to redo all of it.

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I had many concerns with these pages since I didn't give enough thought to the background and what sort of era it is situated.

Page 2 was overly too complicated and it didn't show clearly of how the place actually look as a whole. Though I did want to show it as a busy place, too much detail crambed in made it look messy.

The transaction from scene to scene was really messy. The flow of the story at the beginning is always hard to pull off >< Well thats what I think anyway :3

A whole scene was replaced and redone, the whole story itself was genuinely messy and the flow was really embarresingly bad. It's all cause I really wanted to create a short clean intro story in the first chapter under 30 pages. Which is not gonna happen, after deciding that limiting my first chapter to 30 was a bad plan and with some careful planning, my first chapter may even come up to 80 pages -_-;

By the way, does anyone know what is Trackback for?

tag : akitokit failed comic manga pages

Rosaline and Minnerva

Lifeless

Rosaline and Minnerva

Rosaline and Minnerva!!

a.k.a Rose and Minna

Welcome!! I hope you will enjoy stay :3

Rose and Minna, 2 really important characters of my story "Lifeless". Childhood friends and who would share and become close companions in the story. Minna is always strict and can sometimes get annoyed by Roses' laid back attitude. But things seems to work out when they are paired up.
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